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INT APARTMENT STAIRWELL - DAY
Derek comes down from his apartment and
is ambushed by Amelie, who suddenly reveals
herself from the shadows. She confronts him
and pleads with him, but he brushes her off.
He finally has to push her away and leaves.
She collapses to the floor, holding her belly
and crying.
(contains shots, numbered):
84 - FS stairway, looking up, follow Derek to
reveal Amelie85 - CU Derek,
reaction86 - MS 2 shot Derek, Amelie, dolly around to reverse MS, tilt down, follow Amelie to floor
What's the standard way to reformat this so that the shots are distinctly identified yet still indicate the overall scene? And then that would be used for planning daily shooting schedules, making sure we got all the shots needed, setups, etc.
I was going to do this way, but not sure if this is "proper". I'd like it to be something I can hand off to actors and not have them freak out over.
(shooting script?)
INT APARTMENT STAIRWELL - DAY
84 FS Derek, coming down stairs from his apartment.
Follow to reveal Amelie, emerging from shadowsbeside stairs.
85 CU Derek's reaction.
86 MS 2 shot
Amelie confronts Derek and pleadswith him, but he brushes her off. Dolly
around for Rev MS. Derek pushes her
away and leaves. Tilt down follow
Amelie collapsing to floor, holding her
belly and crying.
DISSOLVE TO:
SCENE 22.
INT. APARTMENT STAIRWELL - DAY
84 F.S.
Derek, coming down stairs from his apartment.PAN PULL TO REVEAL
Amelie, emerging from shadowsbeside stairs.
85 C.U.
Derek's reaction.86 TWO SHOT of Amelie confronting Derek. She
pleads with him, but he brushes her off.SPIN AROUND to Derek.
He pushes her awayand leaves. SLOW PUSH on Amelie,TILT FOLLOW as she falls to the floor,
holding her belly and crying.
DISSOLVE TO:
SCENE 23.
EXT. CITY STREETS - DAY
87 CAR DOLLY FOLLOWS
Amelie as she walksalong the sidewalk, still clutching her belly in agony.
